Wednesday, November 18, 2009

quarrel

This is a very old poem from my journals. I took it out and edited it a bit. It is one of my favourites, as it never fails to bring back the memories.



photo by jzlomek
image from morguefile.com





quarrel

like a rush
of arctic wind
that scuttles over
a winter pond
dusting hoarfrost on reeds,
we sat, stiff , cold
as strangers

no words, no words pass between us today.
no words, no words she said.



revised 07/12/08
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 )

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12 Comments:

Blogger 非凡 said...

I'm appreciate your writing skill.Please keep on working hard.^^

21 November, 2009 17:38  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

Hi

Thanks for visiting, and your encouraging words. :)

22 November, 2009 10:57  
Anonymous R.K.SINGH said...

I readily liked this poem. Excellent.
R.K. Singh

22 November, 2009 14:14  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

Hi R.K.

Thanks for visiting! It's great to know of another poetry blog. guess i will have to post more regularly. :)

22 November, 2009 18:25  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

No words..

from this side too..

22 November, 2009 22:09  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

how are you, gautami?

you are not posting as much as before. work has taken a toll on my postings. has the school holidays started at your side? ours are starting soon (tomorrow!). though i am not a teacher. :(

22 November, 2009 23:28  
Blogger Ana said...

this poem really explains how i feel tonight...i love it.

23 November, 2009 13:33  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

Hi Ana

i am glad you like the poem. :)
thanks for the visit!

23 November, 2009 20:51  
Blogger Jolly said...

hi........
your blog is very nice..
keep it up
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24 November, 2009 15:28  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

Thanks, Jolly. :)

24 November, 2009 21:59  
Blogger Chandni said...

Oh I loved this poem! Poetry is at its most powerful when brief. I stumbled here through Magiceye's blog. Nice to be here :)

16 January, 2010 14:59  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

Hi Chandni

thanks for visiting! hope you will be a regular reader here. :)

i am a fan of Magiceye too. :)

16 January, 2010 23:15  

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