quarrel
photo by jzlomek
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quarrel
like a rush
of arctic wind
that scuttles over
a winter pond
dusting hoarfrost on reeds,
we sat, stiff , cold
as strangers
no words, no words pass between us today.
no words, no words she said.
revised 07/12/08
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 )
12 Comments:
I'm appreciate your writing skill.Please keep on working hard.^^
Hi
Thanks for visiting, and your encouraging words. :)
I readily liked this poem. Excellent.
R.K. Singh
Hi R.K.
Thanks for visiting! It's great to know of another poetry blog. guess i will have to post more regularly. :)
No words..
from this side too..
how are you, gautami?
you are not posting as much as before. work has taken a toll on my postings. has the school holidays started at your side? ours are starting soon (tomorrow!). though i am not a teacher. :(
this poem really explains how i feel tonight...i love it.
Hi Ana
i am glad you like the poem. :)
thanks for the visit!
hi........
your blog is very nice..
keep it up
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Thanks, Jolly. :)
Oh I loved this poem! Poetry is at its most powerful when brief. I stumbled here through Magiceye's blog. Nice to be here :)
Hi Chandni
thanks for visiting! hope you will be a regular reader here. :)
i am a fan of Magiceye too. :)
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