Saturday, March 31, 2007

March kukai : Song

dsnake is surprised and happy. He thinks he's doing something right, because the haiku entry he submitted in haikuworld's March Free-Format kukai came in 5th spot out of 22, with 18 votes. Okay, this is not first place, but when the previous 2 entries weighed in with just 2 votes, you can understand his surprise.

Enjoy! Oh yes, he would like to thank polona for her "show, don't tell" advice. That makes the difference. :)


not dsnake1.
image by dsnake1


Song


chilly morning
a bathroom crooner
murdering a song

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15 Comments:

Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Ha! This is good!!

31 March, 2007 21:36  
Blogger magiceye said...

Congratulations!
you are on song!!

31 March, 2007 22:46  
Blogger Bluesky_Liz said...

You the man, dsnake.

I think many people can relate to hearing songs being murdered on chilly mornings. *grinz*

01 April, 2007 12:17  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

pat,
thank you!

magiceye,
thank you, sir!

liz,
"grinz"
i am one of those that murder songs on chilly mornings. :D

01 April, 2007 12:30  
Blogger floots said...

well done
(but now stop that singing) :)

01 April, 2007 14:25  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

floots,
thanks.

that awful huh? Skye's a long way from here..:)

02 April, 2007 00:00  
Blogger polona said...

congrats, dsnake! i'm glad you made it!

02 April, 2007 01:35  
Blogger david santos said...

thanks for your work!
What a beautiful poem you have. have a good week

02 April, 2007 20:06  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

polona,
thanks!
you are a good haiku "teacher". :)

david,
thanks for your kind words. :)

02 April, 2007 20:26  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Very good.

Congratulations..

05 April, 2007 01:01  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

hi gautami,
thank you!

06 April, 2007 00:13  
Blogger Plus Ultra said...

Congratulations

07 April, 2007 06:46  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

hi plus,
thank you!
long time no see. i bet you are very busy with your patients. Good to see you again.

07 April, 2007 17:33  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

:)

08 April, 2007 13:28  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

andrew,
thanks for the smile. :)

08 April, 2007 20:31  

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