March kukai : Song
dsnake is surprised and happy. He thinks he's doing something right, because the haiku entry he submitted in haikuworld's March Free-Format kukai came in 5th spot out of 22, with 18 votes. Okay, this is not first place, but when the previous 2 entries weighed in with just 2 votes, you can understand his surprise.
Enjoy! Oh yes, he would like to thank polona for her "show, don't tell" advice. That makes the difference. :)
image by dsnake1
Song
chilly morning
a bathroom crooner
murdering a song
Enjoy! Oh yes, he would like to thank polona for her "show, don't tell" advice. That makes the difference. :)
image by dsnake1
Song
chilly morning
a bathroom crooner
murdering a song
posted by dsnake1 at 3:33 PM
16 Comments:
Ha! This is good!!
Congratulations!
you are on song!!
You the man, dsnake.
I think many people can relate to hearing songs being murdered on chilly mornings. *grinz*
pat,
thank you!
magiceye,
thank you, sir!
liz,
"grinz"
i am one of those that murder songs on chilly mornings. :D
well done
(but now stop that singing) :)
floots,
thanks.
that awful huh? Skye's a long way from here..:)
congrats, dsnake! i'm glad you made it!
thanks for your work!
What a beautiful poem you have. have a good week
polona,
thanks!
you are a good haiku "teacher". :)
david,
thanks for your kind words. :)
Very good.
Congratulations..
hi gautami,
thank you!
Congratulations
hi plus,
thank you!
long time no see. i bet you are very busy with your patients. Good to see you again.
:)
andrew,
thanks for the smile. :)
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