that you left me
❤
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that you left me
i was afraid
time will erase
your memories
your smiles
and i am
getting old
so today
i will just
write
some words
i cannot
send you
a card
like before
or take your
hands in mine
and point to
the stars
in the sky
take this as
a poem
for you
and if you
have read it
you will smile
and would
have cried.
28.01.2008
**********
Still, one of my personal favourites...
Black Sabbath - She's Gone
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2018
that you left me
i was afraid
time will erase
your memories
your smiles
and i am
getting old
so today
i will just
write
some words
i cannot
send you
a card
like before
or take your
hands in mine
and point to
the stars
in the sky
take this as
a poem
for you
and if you
have read it
you will smile
and would
have cried.
28.01.2008
**********
Still, one of my personal favourites...
Black Sabbath - She's Gone
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2018
posted by dsnake1 at 10:06 PM
15 Comments:
Yes. (Sigh.) You say it perfectly.
... and would have cried
That says so much of the leaving.
This poem is beautiful.Very moving.
I like to think she did read, and smiled, maybe through tears. Beautiful, Lee San. How lovely to be remembered with love down all the years.
One post card a thousand sentiments
Happy Sunday Cheong Lee san
Much🖤love
This is so poignant and sweet ❤️
The sadness of our hearts when a lost love creeps into our memories.
This is so sweetly sensitive. Nice to imagine the receiver of a poem that essentially says, "I miss you."
A beautiful remembrance — such an emotive verse. :-)
Rosemary,
Thank you! :)
Bjorn,
it does? Thank you! :)
Rallentanda,
Thank you! :)
Sherry,
i like to think that too. i think she would like it too.
Gillena,
thank you! :)
Sanaa,
thank you! :)
Donna,
ah, “when a lost love creeps into our memories”.
thank you. :)
Myrna,
:)
thank you!
Anmol,
thank you! :)
Heartbreaking
Profound and poignant! I loved it:)
Thank you Cheong for your kind words on my interview @PU:)
KB,
thank you!
Amit,
thank you! It’s a pleasure to read your interview at PU. :)
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