tombstone
The theme or phrase in Haikuworld's September 2008 kukai in the Free Format section was "any type of Rock or Stone".
This was the entry I submitted. It attracted a total of ... 2 votes. Oh well, better luck next try. :)
photo by DHester
image from pixelperfect
tombstone
fading gold paint
on her name carved in marble.
September day.
13.09.08
********
This one, I didn't send in.
wild flower peeps
from crevice in concrete.
good morning.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 )
This was the entry I submitted. It attracted a total of ... 2 votes. Oh well, better luck next try. :)
photo by DHester
image from pixelperfect
tombstone
fading gold paint
on her name carved in marble.
September day.
13.09.08
********
This one, I didn't send in.
wild flower peeps
from crevice in concrete.
good morning.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 )
posted by dsnake1 at 11:03 PM
11 Comments:
Their loss!
I like the second one too...
:D
thank you!
I love the though in line 1 and 2 in the 1st one. maybe next time :)
thank you, andrew!
no problem with the votes. :)
sweet and gentle as the flower engraved so gentle on a stone
Nasra
Nasra, thank you!
always great to hear from you. :)
Both are lovely, I especially like the second, the visual of the wildflowers peeping, they do look
like they are indeed peeping.
I enjoyed both of these...your delicate touch.
cynthia,
thanks for your comments. :)
i was thinking of sketching a drawing to accompany the words, but was bogged down by work.
deborah,
glad to see you are back. :)
You stop working TOO hard and write more.
And good to see you turning off word verification. I know you got a lot of spam a while back.
heh, can't help it, my friend. gotta put food on the table. :D
i like what you are doing with word verification, getting the community aware. good job!
i will still maintain comment moderation for the time being. it's like having a guard at the door while you are away. :)
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