T Rex
So is it an inspiration or a disaster?
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T Rex
1.)
a pale sun
straining
to cleave
a ghostly fog
of chill and grit.
T Rex looks up
and rears
its truck-like head
snarls
and out
of portcullis teeth
drips
blood and
leftover meat.
65,000,000.)
a tropic sun
straining
to scatter
a dusty fog
of pulverised rock
boom of crane swings
sure as battle axe
wrecking ball
crushes
old shop houses
in two years
new shopping mall
3.09.1989 (part 1)
3.06.2008 (part 65 millionth)
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 )
9 Comments:
i think they could even stand alone but work powerfully together...
thank you, polona.
i wanted to show who was, and who is, the master of the planet. :)
riotious! vivid imagery...
loved it
i thought this was a serious piece of writing. :)
thanks, magiceye.
yes, they both go together go together so well -- ah, 1989 - the year I was married. :)
I like the underlying depth in this. Can we have more?
thank you, andrew.
some years, you remember better than others, yes? :)
gautami, thanks!
i am glad you like the 2 parts working as a whole.:)
I think the two parts fit perfectly. The killing machine imagery is weighted with cold steel. I like this very much.
thank you, deborah. :)
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