rick mobbs' image prompt (2)
I am a bit tardy with the prompt (blame it on the office work) but still managed one. Better late than never, no?
painting by Rick Mobbs
the lights of my heart
without you
watching these harbour lights
is not the same.
they don't dance
and skip
like flames
on shimmering skin.
and
i hear no more
the sounds
of our laughter
skimming across the waters
mingling with the splash
of waves on stone piers,
the boom of foghorns.
now the lights
they just shuffle
as on tired feet,
even the moon
detest to show
its face.
and i could not
point out to you anymore
like an old salty dog,
the coast guard cutter
that's coming home
from a night watch,
the container ship
bringing oil and grain
to feed our city,
those moving lights
are a cruise liner
like a castle on water
brighter than a thousand
christmas trees.
and so
on some
summer nights
like these
when even the breeze
seems cold
and heartbroken
when it was just me
and the sea
as i look across the waters
on those harbour lights
sometimes i wonder
are you watching
watching
from the other side.
07/07/08
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 )
12 Comments:
Very beautifully put. I took it in another direction!
thank you, gautami.:)
this piece is intended to be a poem on loss.
I find this reflection on loss very moving. I'm glad you wrote. I'll put a link on my blog. Thank you. The poem fits.
thanks, rick!
a lot of catching up with your artworks to do. :)
this one touces me with its beauty and sadness...
thank you for your kind words, polona.
this is lovely!
thank you, magiceye. :)
it's amazing how beauty can come from sadness...
thank you, andrew!
Nice poem, I am looking for links, would you like a link?
My blog is:
Quantum Art and Poetry.
hi mr. harvey,
thank you!
i will be happy to link. :)
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