Photo-Poetry Challenge : Photo 6
I was thinking what can be on the minds of soldiers on the eve of a big battle. I wrote this piece based on the battle of the Metaurus between the Romans and the Carthaginians in 207 B.C.
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image by Bluesky_Liz
they may not see another sundown
Soon their spear tips
will glint in the moonlight
but for now they watch the sun
going down over the hills
as if their archers had shot it down
painting the sky with angry slashes
of crimson and gold
for tomorrow facing the Carthaginians
and their mercenaries in the valley
they may not see another sundown
15/06/06
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8 Comments:
Nice, nice. Something like World Cup matches too, huh. :P
thanks, gilbert!
i've put a small bet on England winning the Cup, think i'm crazy? :)
This is pretty good. :)
liz,
i like war poetry.
now back to the world cup. :)
the timeless ethic of the warrior
as relevant now at ever
well done
This piece reminds me of TROY :)
Can imagine all the hunky warriors in skirts, such a waste that so many handsome men must die in pointless battles.
sigh.
floots,
thank you!
medusa,
hunky warriors at Troy? This piece works ! :)
peter,
thanks for visiting! :)
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