Photo-Poetry Challenge : Photo 8
I was thinking of what to write on this photo, when I lit a cigarette and looked out of the window at the night scenes. A storm was brewing, the clouds were turning a shade of leaden red, and my thoughts turned to her.
And the words just came out, just like that. The mind is a strange master. Stranger still, it did not rain that night.
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image by Bluesky_Liz
Helpless
to have lost you,
as i watched helpless,
gut-wrenched,
as the lymphoma devoured you,
just leaving you
skin on bones,
shutting out my light,
as a storm's clouds
obscuring the sun,
and you,
never giving up the fight,
i felt,
i felt
so utterly
useless.
24.05.06
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6 Comments:
Reading your poem reminds me of a question i once posed to my husband. I asked him, if i were to die before him, how long would it take him to get over me. An estimate would do.
And he says, he doesn't think anyone gets over someone. But they just learn to manage to live with the pain of the loss somehow.
*hug*
This certainly is quite a punch to the gut.
medusa,
touch wood!
i think you have a very good hubby who really love you. Lucky gal!
liz,
i was thinking of her sufferings & pain she was going through when i wrote this.
One of your best, my friend! :)
I agree.
- Liz
thanks, guys!
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