the trenches, somewhere in the future
photo by chelle
the trenches, somewhere in the future
we watch
the deadly arcs
of the ICBMs
curving over
the clouds
like a scimitar
on their way
to pulverise
a city
then get back
to the grisly task
at hand
tossing
the enemy wounded
into the ditches
no crosses
for the fallen
we sweep
a flamethrower
over them
for good measure
the black oily clouds
from their plastic
and metals
cling to the trenches
like a dark shroud.
and then
we sit in our
assault vehicles
check our weapons
send out
the spy drones
and wait
patiently
for the next wave
of enemy androids.
war was never the same again
since the humans sent us out
robots
against
robots.
written 25/08/08
revised 09/06/12
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“I think the development of full artificial intelligence could spell the end of the human race. Once humans develop artificial intelligence, it will take off on its own and redesign itself at an ever-increasing rate. Humans, who are limited by slow biological evolution, couldn’t compete and would be superseded.”
-- Stephen Hawking, in an interview with the BBC
Shared on Poetry Pantry #417 at Poets United.
©cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2018
14 Comments:
This is an interesting scenario. Last night on the news, they showed a drone that can detect and immobilize enemy drones. So you are right on target with this poem.
Great piece of fantasy writing
Maybe this IS the future. Could be really. Not so far fetched.
Love both the poem and the quote. :-)
Greetings from London.
Wow this is intense. Humans still creating war inticing the robots.
Happy Sunday Cheong Lee san
Much🌻love
Sherry,
scary, right? drones are already hunting and killing enemy combatants with the controllers hundreds or thousands of kilometres away.
Jae,
thank you! :)
Mary,
i think this is where we are heading. as AI is becoming more sophisticated, with complex algorithms, written for these robot, Hawking's words may prove chillingly true.
A Cuban in London,
thank you! the quote is pretty chilling, eh? :)
Gillena,
humans will find creative ways to wage war. :(
The flame-thrower startled me. And then came the gradual revelation. Masterfully done ... and the scenario seems all too likely.
Oh this is wonderfully surrreal and futuristic! I hope we humans steer clear of death and destruction..
Rosemary,
:)
i think it's a good chance the future is heading that way, maybe the superpowers are already planning or working on that.
Sanaa,
thank you!
we can only pray and hope on that...
I like the way you have written this as gives a fast pace to what may well come. Quite a scary reality!
just a bit of crystal ball gazing, Julian. :)
A new ending for "I, Robot"? Accept for the revelation of robots, however, this is shocking as a realistic scene of war with mass graves and cities in rubble. A frightening world. BTW, I have written many Scifi poems, and love the genre!
:)
yes, it seems that the robots in my poem were designed only with the 3rd Law of Robotics!
glad to know of someone who likes science fiction too, and writes sci-fi poems. yah!
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