Kwong Wai Shiu Hospital, 6.15 p.m
This work is part of a batch I submitted to a poetry competition.
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Kwong Wai Shiu Hospital, 6.15 p.m
i hate it.
who likes the stench of dried spit ?
the stuffy air of ageing wards
the stares of the old pitifuls
eyes blank as lost memories.
but can't leave Mother.
she lies helpless on that bed
the stroke was that horrendous.
have to change her sheets
bits of rice still sticks to it,
the attendants are so careless
she smiles when i come.
there can be joy at such places
light in darkness.
i hold her frail hands
smiling my plastic smile
the grief in my heart
all bottled up
seeing her wasting, bones and all,
like that peeling paint on the wall.
who likes the stench of dried pee?
not you, not me.
--- 1998 ---
9 Comments:
Odors that burn into painful memories. It appears hospitals are univerisal in these. Excellentlt described!! If you find your muse and mine is there would you send her drunk butt home?
My dad never came back from the hospital. Somewhat similar situation. Love overwhelmed the stench.
He did not come back....
i too have been through similar times
it's a strangely ambivalent situation but i agree with gautami
powerful piece
thank you
thanks, pat.
the place i described may not be top notch, but they did a good job looking after her, and for this i am grateful.
your muse sure is a long way from Georgia if i do see her here. :)
gautami,
yes, love overcomes all..
floots,
thanks for the kind words.
oh, this is powerful!
had a similar experience recently but mother recovered for the time being...
''she smiles when i come.
there can be joy at such places
light in darkness.''
exactly the reason for living!
polona,
thank you.
glad to hear that your mother is fine. you must be one anxious lady at that time.
magiceye,
thanks!
you're right. despite her disability, she's one optimistic woman.
powerful!
those images and odors linger on-
been on several ends of the hospital situation:
as professional,
as patient,
and as friend, relative, or spouse of someone in the hospital
well-written
I don't think your muse is lost.
hi gel,
thank you.
hope everything is fine with GEM, and he is recovering well.
this poem is an old work which i have posted earlier in this blog. :)
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