Dusk
image by dsnake1
I have been busy with work lately. Once again, recalled back to the office at 2 a.m. in the morning. Think I will write about these nocturnal episodes later. I have grown panda spots around my eyes.
Re-work on an old poem that I have been trying to complete for years. Never really was satisfied with it, even now.
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Dusk
she teases me
with such sensuality
as she brushes on
a sprinkling of rouge
and
blushing flame red
she wraps strands
of golden gossamer
around
her
fluid curves
and soon
she dons
a dark velvety gown
evenly sequined
with
twinkling diamonds.
20.11.90
posted by dsnake1 at 3:13 PM
4 Comments:
be satisfied
this captures a mundane/magical moment so well
dusk
- a time of sadness and desire
thank you
floots,
thank you. coming from you, i guess this poem is good enough. :)
unfortunately this is the kind of poem that you can play with and never get satisfied with .... at some point, you have to quit and move on.
gilbert,
i guess that's solid advice from you. at some point, we have to move on..
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