Somewhere
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Maybe letting go is hard to do.
A few days ago was my late wife's death anniversary. After a quiet moment with her at a temple, in the presence of the bodhisattva and arhats ,amid the sounds of chirping birds and distant traffic, the words just poured out.
Aw, maybe i'm getting old.
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somewhere
it's been twelve years
you should have been
re-incarnated
and
if you did
you would be
a child
by now
and if i walk past
you
somewhere
in a street
in Redhill
or Tampines
would i
still
recognise you?
and i will
if
you are clutching
a plush bear
&
hypnotised by flowers
then
if you look me
in the eyes
and i see the fire
i will know,
it's you
16.01.2006
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11 Comments:
This is very touching.
i
like you
will hold this thought
thank you
Ummm ... Don't know what to say. Peace to you, Dsnake1.
just to drop a line to you 'cause you have stalking the nightmare as one of your books. i've met harlan ellison...he's a bitter and angry old man. i managed to get myself called a "litterbug fuck" in front of the whole audience. you like philip k. dick, too, right?
liz,
thank you. :)
floots,
you are so kind. :)
gilbert,
don't know why i find it easier to write on sad things..
hi sixteenbit,
glad you dropped by.
you met harlan ellison
in person, that's great! I love "stalking the nightmare"
thanks for recommending philip k. dick, i have not read him yet. may pick up his books one day.
sci-fi is one of my favourite genre of stories. :)
This is realy a verry good poem. I like it a lot as it is well said. Good writing. I find it one of thouse poems that I say "I wish that I had writen that." Job well done.
david,
thank you,
you are a very good writer yourself. :)
i like the flow of the poem, simple yet touches deep within...
she left you with sweet memories; tat beats staying with u, creating sour experiences... ;)
panda,
"tat beats staying with u, creating sour experiences... ;)"
heheh!
oops suddenly realise how bad tat sounds... the "you" is generic hor... not shooting at u "personal" hehhehehe
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