Sunday, July 01, 2018

paper stars

Hoshi, you make all these origami stars so that the lights in the night skies can shine again?



photo by gv96 at pixabay



paper stars


once upon some
paper stars

we made a
promise

but the night
pitch black

came between

us.



07/11/2015
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Where ever you are, may your heart always be joyful.

Joan Baez -- Forever Young








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12 Comments:

Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh, sad and beautiful.

02 July, 2018 00:49  
Blogger Mary said...

Sad when something prevents a promise from being kept! Very evocative writing.

02 July, 2018 06:18  
Blogger R.K. Garon said...

OUCH!
ZQ

02 July, 2018 07:29  
Blogger Truedessa said...

I wonder how many paper stars - I once read the number of paper stars has something to do with love or luck or maybe both.

02 July, 2018 09:08  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

Sherry,

thanks. yes, it's about a loss.


Mary,

thank you. :)


ZQ,

easy there! :)


Truedessa,

yes, it can be for both, and the number can have some significance. e.g. 129 - 'forever love', 365 - a year of blessings.

02 July, 2018 16:13  
Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

Beautifully eloquent write!💜

02 July, 2018 19:14  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

thank you, Sanaa! :)

02 July, 2018 21:09  
Blogger hyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely lovely. Sad yet very beautiful.
Anna :o]

03 July, 2018 03:24  
Blogger Sarah Russell said...

Wishes upon paper stars. Just wonderful! I love the simplicity, no, the delicacy of this.

03 July, 2018 11:28  
Anonymous dsnake1 said...

Anna,

thank you! :)


Sarah,

thank you! i like the word 'delicacy'. :)

03 July, 2018 17:31  
Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Beautifully (and so economically) evocative.

06 July, 2018 09:26  
Anonymous dsnake1 said...

thank you, Rosemary! :)

07 July, 2018 13:55  

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