for that bowl of rice
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for that bowl of rice
maybe
it was the sum
of all the little
tiring journeys
adding up
or the
proverbial straw
i do not really
mean to
raise my voice
i smile
but
who knows the lead in my heart
i trudge miles
for that bowl of rice
and
not for me alone.
written 13.09.92
revised 16.06.07
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“These woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.”
― Robert Frost, Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening
Shared on Poetry Pantry #195 at Poets United.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2014
Labels: family, fatigue, frustration, love, lovesongs, Poetry
12 Comments:
Oh... this is profound..
thank you, Sumana! it is more of anger. :)
i feel you man...life is hard at times....and we are not just providing for ourselves and it can feel so desperate at times as well in the work we do....can relate to the stress behind this one...
its cool you have held onto this page....
"I smile, but who knows the lead in my heart." I do, Lee San, for I smile, too.....I especially love "I trudge miles for that bowl of rice." I love this poem!
I like how the anger can be felt seething ever so subtly behind the short lines and your smiling facade. A very good poem!
Excellent! ...and you know the way to my smile, introducing on exit, Robert Frost :-)
I hear you, dSnake. I hear you loud and clear. I do feel the anger.
I love this poem. Sometimes I get comatosed with with all the peace and love so it is good to see a spark of anger:)
It feels as very generous person here...on the hard journey of soul...
Brian,
yes, it's all the stress that's stretched to breaking point that wrote this poem. you thought what all you have done is not appreciated, you blew up and then regretted it. :(
Sherry,
thank you! I love this poem too, for all its emotions. the smile is to try to mitigate the situation. :)
Gabriella,
thank you! i like to write angry poems. :)
ZQ,
where's the smiley sticker?
ah, Robert Frost. i used the ending of that poem, to compare to my still long journey (i hope).
Mary,
so the poem works! thank you!
Cressida,
haha! i go ballistic once a while. (maybe more than once a while) :D
humbird
thanks for the visit!
well, just working to put food on the table. :)
Wonderfully expressed!
thank you, my friend! :)
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