Letters from Bukit Merah
It does not even look like a poem, and on hindsight, maybe I should not have submitted it. But the damage has been done. First impression counts. The idea is, by using this, it serves as an introduction, to the subject and theme that is to follow.
So, here's the hors d'oeuvre.
image by dsnake1
Letters from Bukit Merah
Because the rent is cheap,
and i do not have much money,
and it is only a ten minutes
walk to my workplace,
what would you have done in my shoes?
17.05.07
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© dsnake1
Note : Bukit Merah is one of the earliest public housing estates in Singapore.
Labels: Poetry, poetry competition
5 Comments:
Well awards or not ...its light poem and touch the heart
Nasra
well, it's an intriguing opening and makes me want more.
Nasra,
thank you. :)
polona,
more to come. 8 in the entry. :)
I love this. I think what I like about your work is the down-to-earthness.
- Liz
Liz,
thank you.
just writing what i saw. :)
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