Poem inspired by a song - November Rain
It is one of those songs that when you listen to it twenty years down the road, it will still be as fresh as ever. I don't know, that's how I like it. Listen to the piano intro, maybe the reason's there. This is one of the songs in my hi-fi if I need to be alone for a while.
It's the tail end of October and the rain is coming down hard these two days. Which is a good thing, as it will clear the air of that choking haze.
image by dsnake1, from a scan of a CD cover
after a rain
sometimes
i find joy
in solitude
which is
not to say
i crave
loneliness
but
i hear
the quiet
of leaves
falling
like tears
feel the ebb
of sea waves
caressing
shifting sands
unwilling yet
to yield
and i
shelter
in the dark
like bats
seeking
moonlight
waiting
the acrid
ash
of anger
to
sink to
an abyss
then
like a rush
of fresh wind
after
a rain
face the world
again.
03/10/06
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11 Comments:
That's beautiful.
November Rain by Guns&Roses was a true masterpiece. It had a whole orchastra in the background and all.
Sometimes you just have to reconcile with yourself. Love it!!
couldn't agree more
nice one
hey Liz,
you listen to Guns N' Roses too? November Rain was a true asterpiece indeed. thank you!!
pat,
thanks! i guess we need to be alone sometimes, just to let our thoughts have a rest :)
hey floots,
my favourite Scottish poet (OK, i know you are an Englishman!) is back! thank you, my friend!
oh, dsnake, this is simply wonderful! love it!
and gnr's november rain is a masterpiece indeed!
polona,
thank you! and you listen to GNR too!
hey, LOVE this post and this poem is beautiful indeed. Also, I'm sure almost everyone on this planet has heard of THAT song. Impossible not to love it, I absolutely love the tortured guitar strains near the end of the song, the entire melody is stirring and blissful. Puts you in such a soulful sad mood, but in a nice way innit? :)
Who can forget November Rain?? One of my favs that I used to play over and over again when I listen to GNR.
And I feel I can identify with your poem so much.. esp the line about craving to be alone but not loneliness...
hey medusa and kittyn,
looks like everyone has heard of this song!
glad that both of you like this poem. :)
I think this must be your best so far, it is raining here in Kluang and that helps a lot with clearing the haze and bringing down the psi
oh plus,
thank you! it's getting better all the time, is it? :D
the rain is certainly a welcome relief. glad the psi has gone down in Kluang too. :)
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