The Shortest Poems
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A haiku, 3 lines, 17 syllables? Ginsberg's American Sentence, 1 sentence, 17 syllables, no more no less. Or a monostitch, a one line poem, usually less than 17 syllables?
Or Strickland Gillilan's couplet "Lines on the Antiquity of Microbes" :
Adam
Had 'em.
Seems like the title is longer than the poem.
Or "Ode to a Goldfish", often attributed to Ogden Nash :
Oh, wet
pet
Just 3 syllables, my friends.
Or how about this one, just one word "lighght" by Aram Saroyan, which caused a little storm between the National Endowment for the Arts and the U.S. Congress.
Or how about this one, "ly" by Geof Huth? Was he thinking of adverbs when he wrote this?
Or this by Bill Pauly (from The Haiku Handbook) which doesn't even had a word. Do you see the cat on the fence?
And in my opinion, the best shortest poem, if there is such a thing, is by jwcurry. Just a lower case i dotted with his own fingerprint. Like this (done with my own fingerprint, for this illustration).
And from me, just for the fun for this post, 2 "short poems".
Do you see through the Lies?
another visual word from me. and how about this monostich that i wrote at my other blog :
pregnant silence after she said she was.
I know. Our attention span in this internet age is shorter than the power cable on the computer. This post is getting too draggy, so it is time to cut it short. Promise to be back with a longer poem next post. :)
THE
END
(this is not a short poem)
sometimes, the less said, the better.
Shared on Poetry Pantry #285 at Poets United.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2016
Labels: essay, visual poetry
26 Comments:
Thought this was insightful indeed :D sometimes the lesser we speak the more impact we create.
Hope you're having a nice weekend!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
thank you, Sanaa!
the weekend was good, but the earlier part of the week was... tough. :)
Very, very clever! I like both of your contributions. Excellent visuals! Love the "G" in pregnant..... Truthfully, I think it is harder to write a VERY short poem oftentimes than to write a very long one. Yours took a lot of thought.
This was so much fun....I had not encountered many of these and they really make you think....so clever....loved both of yours!
Fun! To me this is an entire essay in/on short form.
Very interesting! I still ramble on!!
Short poems is a challenge... indeed a good visual might help.. I guess a double meaning helps.
An interesting post, ds. I especially liked the pregnant pause, LOL.
Ooh we enjoyed very much! Couldn't choose between Ogden Nash or the j... Less is definitely more and very true about attention spans shorter than the computer ca.... ;)
Very interesting, indeed. There is something to be said for brevity, for sure. I am very intrigued by the "Adam Had'em" poem. Ha :-P
I love pregnant. Very, very cool.
I thought I left a comment about the fun of reading and the overall form leading from one to the other being mighty compelling! Here it is again ... Great!
Very interesting! I'm all for brevity.
Love it! In the eighties (in Australia at least) these would have been classed as concrete poetry.)
sometimes one leaf dangling speaks for the whole tree...etc.
insightful.we must remember; all is one
gracias
Mary,
i do agree with you on this point, about being harder to write a very short poem than a very long one. because we have this less words to convey images and emotions
and yes, they do require much more thought. :)
Donna,
glad you find it fun! :)
Susan,
ah, you find it fun too. :)
thotpurge,
thank you! :)
Bjorn,
yes, short poems can be fun and challenging. i love writing haiku. i do have another blog just for shorter verses. :)
Sherry,
thank you! clever, eh? :D
Jae,
haha, thank you! i prefer the jwcurry work though. nothing can be shorter. :D
C.C.
that's true about brevity. you tend to put more thought into it.
Mama Zen,
haha! thank you. :)
Susan,
thanks again. i have comment moderation on and sometimes it is late when i reply, due to work and so on. so it seems the comment may have been gobbled up by Blogger. :D
Toni,
yes, i know. i have read your haiku. :)
Rosemary,
yes, these are still classed as concrete poetry. not to everyone's taste though.
thank you, Marcoantonio.
thanks for your insightful comment. :)
entertaining!
thank you, Tatius! :)
Short. Breath. Ahhh.
this was a fun read! thanks.
M M T,
:D
i think that's another short poem to savour!
James,
the word "fun" keeps cropping up. i must be doing something right. :)
thanks!
That was fun. Thanks.
Greetings from London.
hey Cubano, glad to see you! :)
Like it!
thanks, Rick! :)
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