Friday, November 02, 2012

tampines leisure park, 7 a.m.

I wrote this for NaPoWriMo 2012, in my other blog, "I write too". One of the better poems I wrote this NaPoWriMo, in my opinion. :)

The park in the title is near to my home, and I usually pass through it on my way to work.

photo by weez
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tampines leisure park, 7 a.m.

the rain drops on



soon to be


the darting fingers
of the morning



There are always flowers for those who want to see them.

-- Henri Matisse

I am posting this for Poets Rally Week 76.

© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2012

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Blogger Lucinda Goce Bristol Tamhane Sahakian said...

love the wiggling lines.

simple words, beautiful message.

02 November, 2012 01:28  
Anonymous dsnake1 said...

thanks, Rosemary.

i like to play with line breaks. :)

02 November, 2012 08:43  
Blogger Bing Yap said...

lovely piece!

02 November, 2012 15:26  
Anonymous dsnake1 said...

glad to hear from you, Bing.
thanks for dropping by. :)

02 November, 2012 22:35  
Anonymous poetryroad said...

You are quite talented. Your combination of words makes this easy to read and the message is thoughtfully concise. Also, appreciate you stopping my site as well!

02 November, 2012 23:50  
Blogger magiceye said...

This is simply WOW

03 November, 2012 01:04  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

it is a very cool little the personification of the sun, plucking the flowers....very cool...

03 November, 2012 05:09  
Blogger dsnake1 said...


thank you for your kind words! :)


always good to get a "wow" from you, my friend. :)


thanks! always appreciate your comments. it was a very good morning when i wrote this. :)

03 November, 2012 07:05  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I was curious if you ever thought of changing the layout of your blog?

Its very well written; I love what youve got to
say. But maybe you could a little more in the way of content so people could connect with it better.
Youve got an awful lot of text for only having one or two pictures.
Maybe you could space it out better?
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03 November, 2012 14:24  
Anonymous dsnake1 said...

Hi Anon,

thanks for the feedback. this blog is still on classic template. i have thought of changing it to the new layout template, but i still don't have the nerve to hit the change button. :)

this is a blog dedicated to poetry, so i guess there are always lots of text. but you are right about more could be done in the way of content. i think i am not posting enough, that's part of the problem. i guess i need a rethink on it's design & layout, after all, it's a few years old. :)

03 November, 2012 23:29  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

It appears to me that this web site doesnt load up on a Motorola Droid. Are other folks getting the exact same issue? I enjoy this blog and dont want to have to skip it whenever Im away from my computer.

07 November, 2012 02:06  
Blogger magiceye said...

Delicately beautiful!

13 November, 2012 23:00  
Anonymous dsnake1 said...

it loads ok on a Samsung phone. sorry, i don't have a motorola. :)

15 November, 2012 07:20  
Anonymous dsnake1 said...

thanks, magiceye! :)

15 November, 2012 07:49  
Blogger ashok said...

why don't you join

19 November, 2012 03:29  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

thanks for the heads up, ashok. :)

19 November, 2012 19:50  

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