tampines leisure park, 7 a.m.
I wrote this for NaPoWriMo 2012, in my other blog, "I write too". One of the better poems I wrote this NaPoWriMo, in my opinion. :)
The park in the title is near to my home, and I usually pass through it on my way to work.
photo by weez
image from morguefile.com
tampines leisure park, 7 a.m.
the rain drops on
bougainvillea
and
ferns
crystals
soon to be
plucked
by
the darting fingers
of the morning
sun
12/04/2012
**********
There are always flowers for those who want to see them.
-- Henri Matisse
I am posting this for Poets Rally Week 76.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2012
The park in the title is near to my home, and I usually pass through it on my way to work.
photo by weez
image from morguefile.com
tampines leisure park, 7 a.m.
the rain drops on
bougainvillea
and
ferns
crystals
soon to be
plucked
by
the darting fingers
of the morning
sun
12/04/2012
**********
There are always flowers for those who want to see them.
-- Henri Matisse
I am posting this for Poets Rally Week 76.
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2012
Labels: landscape, NaPoWriMo, Poetry, Singapore, Thursday Poets' Rally, urban
posted by dsnake1 at 12:29 AM
16 Comments:
love the wiggling lines.
simple words, beautiful message.
thanks, Rosemary.
i like to play with line breaks. :)
lovely piece!
glad to hear from you, Bing.
thanks for dropping by. :)
You are quite talented. Your combination of words makes this easy to read and the message is thoughtfully concise. Also, appreciate you stopping my site as well!
This is simply WOW
it is a very cool little verse....love the personification of the sun, plucking the flowers....very cool...
poetryroad,
thank you for your kind words! :)
magiceye,
always good to get a "wow" from you, my friend. :)
Brian,
thanks! always appreciate your comments. it was a very good morning when i wrote this. :)
I was curious if you ever thought of changing the layout of your blog?
Its very well written; I love what youve got to
say. But maybe you could a little more in the way of content so people could connect with it better.
Youve got an awful lot of text for only having one or two pictures.
Maybe you could space it out better?
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Hi Anon,
thanks for the feedback. this blog is still on classic template. i have thought of changing it to the new layout template, but i still don't have the nerve to hit the change button. :)
this is a blog dedicated to poetry, so i guess there are always lots of text. but you are right about more could be done in the way of content. i think i am not posting enough, that's part of the problem. i guess i need a rethink on it's design & layout, after all, it's a few years old. :)
It appears to me that this web site doesnt load up on a Motorola Droid. Are other folks getting the exact same issue? I enjoy this blog and dont want to have to skip it whenever Im away from my computer.
Delicately beautiful!
it loads ok on a Samsung phone. sorry, i don't have a motorola. :)
thanks, magiceye! :)
why don't you join www.poetry.com
thanks for the heads up, ashok. :)
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