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Read on to see how I celebrated it.
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It was nine at night
us troopers, crouching on this dark hill
angry & bone chilled
watching
red tracers probing targets
darth vader lasers
crisscrossing
as the tank guns opened up
flinched & jerked in a frenzied dance
in the brief light of muzzle flashes
pouring 75mm shells into the butte
to explode in showers of mud,
the dark sky
illuminated now and then
by savage bursts of exploding mortar lights
and white flares arced
in graceful parabolas
fiery ribbons
for my birthday
as i turned twenty-one
on a dark raindrenched hill
angry & bone chilled,
the metal of the M16
cold on tired skin
no candles no cakes no golden keys
just a lighted cigarette passed around
comrades
a gulp of contraband beer
the impatient fingering of weapons
a wait for orders
then
the crunch of boots on wet gravel
as we trudged down the hill
our shadows gliding on trees
spooked by illum rounds..
27th November 1989
revised 15.02.06
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9 Comments:
what a juxtaposition of occasions
makes for powerful reading
(and a powerful memory for you each birthday)
cheers
Very interesting descriptions. You make all the shooting and shelling and war-simulation sound almost lovely. Must have suck to spend your birthday doing this kinda thing I'm sure. Where was this? Singapore?
floots,
it was a birthday that is hard to forget. :)
hey medusa,
thanks!. yes, in Sg, but that was a long time ago. and yes, it sux max. :)
I thought it was going to be something R(A). Sigh...
what do you expect, friend?
"evil grin"
What a coincidence your post and mine. I need to send my son over to read yours. He needs to know more about life as you speak of it. He would also appreciate the music of your language. Beautiful and so much imagery.
Liz,
Thank you!
but most of my posts are angry, mushy and gloomy, not exactly role model stuff ! :)
Liked the last two lines, is your shadow still with you, impossible to catch our shadows...till we fall flat on them!
hahaha!
yeah, my shadow is still following me after we had a good dinner. :)
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