Sunday, March 06, 2011

Loss

I wrote and submitted this haiku for the January Free Format kukai at haikuworld. The subject was "Loss".

The results are out and this ku managed a total of ...two votes. Well, at least two readers like it. :)





photo by heirbornstud
image from morguefile.com



loss



anniversary -

your photograph
greasy with my prints.


11/01/2011
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2011

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7 Comments:

Blogger magiceye said...

i like it too!

09 March, 2011 01:04  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

thank you, my friend! :)

i think it was one of the better ones that i have written. :)

09 March, 2011 22:31  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Maybe you will want to put a facebook button to your site. I just marked down the blog, however I must do it by hand. Just my suggestion.

31 March, 2011 23:45  
Blogger thesun4you said...

I thought it was brilliant

01 April, 2011 11:08  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

thank you! :)

02 April, 2011 23:33  
Blogger M. A. S. said...

I also like it. You don't have a lot of text to play with in a haiku. But this painted a vivid picture.

15 April, 2011 14:25  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

Thanks, M.A.S.

glad to come across your blog today. :)

15 April, 2011 18:21  

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