Loss
I wrote and submitted this haiku for the January Free Format kukai at haikuworld. The subject was "Loss".
The results are out and this ku managed a total of ...two votes. Well, at least two readers like it. :)
photo by Alexas_Fotos at pixabay
loss
anniversary -
your photograph
greasy with my prints.
11/01/2011
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© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2011
The results are out and this ku managed a total of ...two votes. Well, at least two readers like it. :)
loss
anniversary -
your photograph
greasy with my prints.
11/01/2011
**********
© cheong lee san ( dsnake1 ) 2011
Labels: haiku, lovesongs, writing competition
posted by dsnake1 at 11:46 PM
7 Comments:
i like it too!
thank you, my friend! :)
i think it was one of the better ones that i have written. :)
Maybe you will want to put a facebook button to your site. I just marked down the blog, however I must do it by hand. Just my suggestion.
I thought it was brilliant
thank you! :)
I also like it. You don't have a lot of text to play with in a haiku. But this painted a vivid picture.
Thanks, M.A.S.
glad to come across your blog today. :)
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